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#22 My Wonderful Description of Flowers (Danielle Dutton)

 Rating: 6/10

    Danielle Dutton's short story reminded me of "Cat Person" by Kristen Roupenian. In "Cat Person," a male character representing toxic masculinity develops an intimate relationship with an underage college student. When the girl starts rejecting him, he shows signs of obsession and eventually calls the girl a 'whore’. Similarly, in Danielle Dutton's story, a taste of feminism is foreshadowed by introducing a man who visits random houses and attempts to assault women. When the protagonist asserts that she doesn't recognize an unknown man who visited her home, the man gradually becomes impatient and turns out to be hostile. The two stories seemed similar in how women were victimized by male manipulations. (Although the severity of male manipulations differs at each level.)

    Apart from Danielle Dutton's method of development used in the story, this could have been more favorable for me. Although the story had a clear development of events, it had many fragments where I couldn't grasp the author's intentions for inserting those fragments. I would've liked the story better if the narrative pieces were more jointly connected. For these reasons, I rate this story a 6 out of 10.

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